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Post by Deleted on Jan 20, 2015 4:51:08 GMT -5
Here's a new one. There are still a couple of lines that bug me a little and maybe someday I'll write a bona fide chorus, but for now, I can live with it.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2015 11:07:59 GMT -5
Revised the song. Here's the new version:
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