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Post by Deleted on Nov 3, 2009 12:11:55 GMT -5
Hi everyone, My new website is nearly ready to launch but I am really needing help editing the text on the pages. I have the content I want for the most part but my grammar and writing needs to be edited. I have really gone out on a limb to afford this website.. so I don't know how much I can pay to have this done. But is there anyone out there who can help? the webpage can be found here: www.chappellgraphics.com/blue/index.php |
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Post by billhammond on Nov 3, 2009 13:50:45 GMT -5
I bet Doug would do it for cheap. ;D
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Post by Doug on Nov 3, 2009 14:02:17 GMT -5
;D
I just build web sites then let the owners tell me what I mis spelled and go back and fix it.
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Post by dradtke on Nov 3, 2009 14:24:55 GMT -5
Just a couple quick comments.
If the purpose of the website is to drum up more business, I would put something about the cochlear implant presentations up in one of the top boxes and leave the singer/songwriter stuff for an inside page.
And in the Music Practioner box I would put a description of what you provide (like in the Ceremonies box) and leave MHTP for the followup page.
And in the descriptive text, I would repeat the business stuff up front for the people who are just going to skim. If it looks like there's too much text, a lot of people won't read it.
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Post by Fingerplucked on Nov 3, 2009 14:38:08 GMT -5
Just a couple quick comments. If the purpose of the website is to drum up more business, I would put something about the cochlear implant presentations up in one of the top boxes and leave the singer/songwriter stuff for an inside page. And in the Music Practioner box I would put a description of what you provide (like in the Ceremonies box) and leave MHTP for the followup page. And in the descriptive text, I would repeat the business stuff up front for the people who are just going to skim. If it looks like there's too much text, a lot of people won't read it. I still think it looks too girlie, but other than that, I wouldn't change a thing, unless an editor-type suggests something in the text. It looks very well organized and shows a good balance. |
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