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Dec 23, 2007 13:40:54 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Dec 23, 2007 13:40:54 GMT -5
hope this is more to your liking sir flake.
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Regret
I have lost every ring, I have broken every chain, And I've burned every bridge on my way.
I have worn out all my welcome, I have scorned each fond approach, And I've torn up every song I ever played.
I have one heart, One head, And one bundle Of regret.
I have placed myself in races That raced through lonely places, But I never could escape my own parole.
I have chased it and I have caught it, I have faced it and I have fought it, But I've wasted every chance to lose control.
I have one heart, One head, And one bundle Of regret.
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Jan 4, 2008 6:56:57 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2008 6:56:57 GMT -5
i changed it for flow and because of the fact that "one bundle of ones regret" doesn't make grammatical sense to me.
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Jan 4, 2008 11:54:01 GMT -5
Post by Cornflake on Jan 4, 2008 11:54:01 GMT -5
Connington, I think you're getting more accessible with this one. I like the way you steer clear of cliches, here as elsewhere. Hope I get to hear this one sometime.
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Jan 4, 2008 12:06:52 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jan 4, 2008 12:06:52 GMT -5
doing my best to record a few tunes at the moment for that myspace thing, but it's looking like it'll be instrumentals i record, because as of yet i haven't got an 8 track (or an anything track) and the mic that i'll be using isn't great quality.
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