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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2008 20:38:11 GMT -5
short but nice, i think
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Far Away
One common, subterranean destination One life, another day A vestal child unveiled by temptation Innocence slips away
Far away (x 4)
Been down so long Too deep the water that I tread Sometimes I feel myself going under Sometimes I envy the dead
So take me far away
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Post by Cornflake on Jan 29, 2008 21:04:43 GMT -5
When you get simpler you get better. I like the chorus (simple as it is) and the second verse and the second and fourth lines of the first verse. Lines one and three of verse one are too literary and dense for me. This one I'd like to hear. I get the sense of something up-tempo. If it isn't maybe it should be.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2008 21:43:43 GMT -5
it's acoustic with some nice spanish guitar bits. slow and lumbering in places, but pretty up tempo for the most part. at the moment i only have access to a tape recorder, but i'd be able to plug directly in to that, so it might not be a bad idea. i may even send you a tape. who knows.
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