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Post by PaulKay on Mar 22, 2023 9:30:52 GMT -5
help me write a song about lost love
Sure, here is a song about lost love that I wrote:
Verse 1 I remember the day we met, It was a beautiful day in May. We were both so young and full of life, And we fell in love without a fight.
Chorus But then you left, And my heart was left in pieces. I don't know how to go on without you, But I know I have to try.
Verse 2 I think about you every day, And I miss your smile and your laugh. I wish I could turn back time, And change the way things ended.
Chorus But then you left, And my heart was left in pieces. I don't know how to go on without you, But I know I have to try.
Bridge I know that I'll never forget you, And I'll always cherish the memories we made. But I also know that I have to move on, And I have to find a way to be happy without you.
Chorus So I'll keep on going, Even though my heart is broken. I'll find a way to be happy, Even though you're gone.
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Post by aquaduct on Mar 22, 2023 9:36:58 GMT -5
Where's the guitar solo?
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Post by PaulKay on Mar 22, 2023 9:39:35 GMT -5
Can you write a poem about music? This was draft #3.
Sure, here is a poem about music:
Music is a language, A universal tongue, That speaks to the soul And touches the heart.
It can make us laugh, It can make us cry, It can make us feel alive.
Music is a gift, A treasure to be cherished, That can enrich our lives And make us feel complete.
Let us celebrate music, Let us embrace its power, Let us let it fill our lives With joy and wonder.
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Post by PaulKay on Mar 22, 2023 9:44:05 GMT -5
No solos, but I did ask this: can you help me with the chord progression in the key of GSure, here are some common chord progressions in the key of G: I-IV-V (G-C-D) I-vi-IV-V (G-Em-C-D) ii-V-I (Am-D7-Gmaj7) vi-IV-V-I (Em-C-D-G) These are just a few examples, and there are many other possible chord progressions in the key of G. You can experiment with different chords and progressions to find what sounds good to you.
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Post by PaulKay on Mar 22, 2023 10:22:09 GMT -5
Draft #3 of "help me write a song about flooding"
Sure, here is a song about flooding:
(Verse 1) The rain came down in sheets, The rivers rose and breached, The levees broke, The homes were soaked.
(Chorus) The flood waters came, And washed away our dreams, Our hopes, our fears, Our memories.
(Verse 2) The flood waters receded, But the damage was done, The homes were gone, The families were torn.
(Chorus) The flood waters came, And washed away our dreams, Our hopes, our fears, Our memories.
(Bridge) We will rebuild, We will recover, We will come back stronger than ever, But the flood waters will always be a part of our story.
(Chorus) The flood waters came, And washed away our dreams, Our hopes, our fears, Our memories.
(Outro) But we will never forget.
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Post by Village Idiot on Mar 22, 2023 10:49:33 GMT -5
Wow. Bard is a pretty crappy songwriter.
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Post by Russell Letson on Mar 22, 2023 10:51:02 GMT -5
A technological breakthrough: ARM (Artificial Rod McKuen).
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Post by billhammond on Mar 22, 2023 10:57:07 GMT -5
On the occasion of JS Bach's birthday yesterday, the classical radio announcer noted that he was an incredible composer, but not much of a poet, quoting this:
On land, at sea, at home, abroad, I smoke my pipe and worship God.
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Post by Russell Letson on Mar 22, 2023 11:06:19 GMT -5
It's better in German--or, optimally, in the original Klingon.
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Post by Marshall on Mar 22, 2023 11:29:42 GMT -5
Brings tears to my eyes.
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Post by Russell Letson on Mar 22, 2023 12:24:03 GMT -5
So does ragweed.
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Post by TKennedy on Mar 22, 2023 15:34:05 GMT -5
I love the economy of the lyrics, the clever rhyming and way they seem to flow effortlessly.
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Post by jdd2 on Mar 22, 2023 17:51:53 GMT -5
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Post by Dub on Mar 22, 2023 18:17:48 GMT -5
The new Bing, which uses ChatGTP-4, came up with this when I asked to compose an Ode to a Guitar.
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Post by Dub on Mar 22, 2023 18:32:08 GMT -5
There is also Folk-RNN, a Web site that will compose a folk melody for you. I learned of this from Marcel of Lessons With Marcel on YouTube.
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Post by millring on Mar 22, 2023 18:32:49 GMT -5
The rhymes, cliches, contrivances The song is a disaster It seems that as a lyricist AI's a poetaster
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Post by RickW on Mar 22, 2023 18:57:33 GMT -5
My Haiku ode to AI
AI writes just crap Spewing digital garbage A turd unpolished
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Post by Village Idiot on Mar 22, 2023 20:28:36 GMT -5
I wanted to play around with Bard but apparently had to put myself on a waiting list. I have a feeling that by the time I'm on the list I will have forgotten what I wanted to ask it in the first place. Which is to write a poem with "Nantucket" in it.
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Post by Dub on Mar 22, 2023 22:26:15 GMT -5
I wanted to play around with Bard but apparently had to put myself on a waiting list. I have a feeling that by the time I'm on the list I will have forgotten what I wanted to ask it in the first place. Which is to write a poem with "Nantucket" in it. That poem has already been written. I think it was composed long ago in some town in Ireland.
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Post by jdd2 on Mar 22, 2023 23:04:03 GMT -5
Here you go: (and I dropped "it" near the end) I wanted to play around with Bard but apparently had to put myself on a waiting list. I have a feeling that by the time I'm on the list I will have forgotten what I wanted to ask in the first place.
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